Friday, March 30, 2012

Lucky 7 Sneak Peek

My friend and storyteller extraordinaire Martin T. Ingham tagged me with this, and it sounded pretty awesome so here we go.

How this works is pretty simple:
1. Go to page 77 of your current Manuscript/Work In Progress
2. Go to line 7
3. Copy down the next 7 sentences or paragraphs, and post them as they are written.
4. Tag 7 other authors

My latest manuscript is Scrolls: Nekros, the second book in the Scrolls series. It'll be releasing in a few short weeks, and it's something I'm really proud of, so the chance to show off a little bit of it is great. I'm not going to tag 7 other authors, mostly because most of my author friends have already done this, so I'll instead just give an open invitation to any writers who haven't done this yet to give it a try.

So here we go, from chapter four. In a book full of intense magic action, it makes me happy that the preview happened to be a sweeter moment, as these are my favorite moments in the book:

What was that for?” he asked.


For letting me in. You don’t know how badly I’ve been wishing you would do that.”


Marty smiled as he stared at her. He felt guilty being cryptic and giving her only some of the facts, but he knew going further would just complicate things, and it could put her in danger, or even scare her away. He wasn’t willing to risk any of those things, especially not now.


Do you want to talk about it some more?” Annabel asked.


He shook his head.


I feel better now.”


She grabbed his hand, entwining her fingers with his. They continued on towards the campus, each content to just be with the other. Annabel guided them on a different route back than the one they had taken to the store, and Marty paused as they rounded a corner.


Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Experience the magic

I just finished preliminary edits on Scrolls: Nekros, the second book in the Scrolls series. Now it'll get passed on to my actual editor, then I'll take her edits and do a revision, then I'll do one more full edit myself. That should all be accomplished in the next month while the cover is getting done, and a month or so from now this book should be ready to get released.

I probably say this every time I finish a book, but this is definitely the best thing I've ever written. It's just so filled with all of the things I love in entertainment. Great action, great character relationships, romance, huge battles. It's a blast when you write for yourself, because the whole time you're entertained. If I was writing a period political drama I'd be bored out of my mind, so it's great to be able to so deeply love what you're creating.

So while this book goes through the final steps of getting ready for publication, now seems like a great time to try and convince any of you who haven't bought it yet to buy a copy of Scrolls Season One. It's a book I'm really proud of. It tells a great story, it's rated PG-13 for intense magic action, it's got battles, romances, twists, angst, bad guys, good guys, secrets, and awesomeness. Here's a convenient collection of links as to where you can purchase it. And if you're not familiar with the full plot, you can read the basics at any of these links.

HALL BROS ENTERTAINMENT = This will get you a copy direct from my company for the low cost of $10. We've got 2 copies on hand, and if you order one of them I'll sign and personalize the book to you.

AMAZON.COM = My personal favorite place to buy books, you can get it for $12 here.

BARNES & NOBLE.COM = My second favorite booksite has print copies of the book for just $10.80.

AMAZON KINDLE = For you e-reader fans out there, snag this bad boy on Kindle for just $2.99.

B&N NOOK = Don't worry Nook fans, $2.99 gets you the book as well!

Tuesday, March 6, 2012

The Ripley Effect

Time to put my nerd cred at risk. Up until last week, I'd never watched Alien, nor had I ever seen more than 15 minutes of Aliens. I decided to remedy this by watching all 4 films in the proper Alien franchise (AVP and AVP: Requiem are not included in this franchise, as far as I'm concerned). So, here are my thoughts, which may be controversial to super movie nerds.

Alien: This movie is fantastic. I've always enjoyed sci-fi horror films, and watching Alien shows me who I have to thank for creating the genre. It's tense, original, well paced, menacing, and when you do get the glimpses of the Alien, it's horrifying and amazing. Considering this movie was made like 30 years ago, the special effects were fantastic. The Alien was completely freaky, and seemed lifelike and real. The characters in the film were pretty good for the most part. A few of them were instantly forgettable, but overall I would say this movie was amazing.

Aliens: I was blown away by this movie. It smartly picks up off of the first one, and makes a guns blazing spectacle out of it. As much as I like sci-fi horror, I like sci-fi action/horror even better. The characters are much better in this one. Ripley, Bishop, Burke, Hicks, Hudson, Vasquez, they all have good presence and are memorable. This Aliens were again awesome looking, and the movie had a great pace and plot, leading to an amazing final battle.

Alien 3: And then this happened. I didn't just dislike this movie, I pretty much hated it. It seemed to lose everything that made the first two great. The characters in this film are immediately forgettable. Ripley is at her least enjoyable here, and aside from her the best character in the film gets ganked by the alien very early on. That leaves just one more memorable character, the psycho-religious criminal Dillon. The characters were such a strength of the second movie, and yet they just populate the third with interchangeable scum bags. Reducing the movie back down to a single Alien was a good idea, but instead of growing the franchise in a new genre direction the way the second film did, they tried to recapture the tense horror of the original, and just completely fail. When the characters run up and down corridors for fifteen minutes at the end, locking doors and unlocking doors behind them, I had no idea what the hell they were even trying to accomplish. It was as mindless as the film itself, which was also paced horribly. Oh and you can't forget to mention the horrible special effects. The weird cgi/puppetry mechanic they used was beyond awful. The alien looked like a floppy meerkat skittering around. This was especially noticeable on the few close up shots, which employed the same great effects from the earlier films. Ultimately, this movie was mind numbingly slow, and culminated with a predictable ending.

Alien: Resurrection: Okay, I loved this movie. Just like Aliens, it took the franchise and did a new genre with it. This was an over the top, comedic, larger than life, almost parody of the franchise, and yet somehow it works. Again, characters shined in this one. Ripley is interesting again as this monstrous, hate filled psycho, and you've got this whole pirate crew of awesome characters like the sharp shooting Christie, the dead too soon captain, Winona Ryder, and then Ron Perlman doing a great job at being a brutish scumbag. The storyline is interesting, the writing is genuinely funny in a lot of places, and there's a lot of creative moments. Alien bursting out of your chest? Grab a bad guy and pull him next to you so the alien bursts from your chest, through his head! After being so boring in the third one, the Aliens were interesting again, and apparently super smart now. Setting up ambushes and using different tactics made them even more menacing than before. And the special effects were good again, unlike Alien 3. Ultimately, I think this one was very successful, and fit well within the evolution of the franchise. I can see why big Alien/Aliens fans might be a bit put off by it, because in a lot of ways it did sort of wag its tongue at the franchise and just sort of have fun with what was taken so seriously in the previous films. But to me, that's why this movie worked. It kept alive the spirit of jumping genres and taking the alien idea in new directions. There was no horror at all in this one, just big guns blazing, wise cracking larger than life characters, and some pretty ludicrous assumptions about how society had involved in Ripley's long absence.

So there you have it. My take on the Alien franchise. My favorites are Aliens, Alien: Resurrection, and then Alien.